"Author's Note"

"After all my failures of home remedies and oral gel I told myself it's time to visit the dentist office. Anyone that knows me kmows that dentists and I don't get along. It started at the age of 7yrs old when I kicked one in the knee for tugging on my teeth."

I wrote about this story because it was the most recent craziest thing that happened to me. I would say to understand this piece you need to know the severity of the pain I went through. My wisom tooth was trying to burst through the gums but couldnt because I had no more room for it to grow. When the surgeon removed the top left one he had to dig threw my gums to get the tooth out. To revise this paper for my eportfolio I would finish the story by writing about my second visit to get the others removed. I find that writing non-fiction stories versus other writing's are more interesting because it's real, something that actually happened. With other writing's such as academic essays you have to do more research to write it because your using other people's information to write it. I learned that a vignette is totally different from just writing about a story straight forward. A vignette is structured differently. It has to have breaks in the story, and the story should be more descriptive. It should also have dialogue. I revised my paper by re-writing it. Taking out things and adding different details.